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Monday is for rainfall
which floods the heart today,
the patter of drops on windows
washes happiness away,

Tuesday is for duty
which cannot break or bend,
doesn't matter if you will struggle
it will find you in the end,

Wednesday is for sorrow
depression, anger, fear,
thoughts of long and winding roads
will make you drop a tear,

Thursday is for submission
your heart's forced release,
the loss of a more simple life
will break you piece by piece,

Friday is for conforming
to what your neighbour wants,
you'll do anything to reach the weekend
to be happy just for once,
©2008-2009 ~ginger-elvis
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i really do hate weekdays
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We all do....lol what about the weekend?

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"Im lucky Im in love with my best friend
Lucky to have been where I have been
Lucky to be coming home again"
-Jason Mraz & Colbie Caillat
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hi this is really great:)
Interesting. Sounds almost like a nursury rhyme but is rather bleak. I like Tuesday, I think that's well spoken :).

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The little devil on everyone's shoulder.
thnk u :)

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If you've got nothing to die for,
Then what have you got to live for?

Dreams are unreal by definition,
Reality is changing one's dreams,
Because when one dream is realised, a new one is born
Extremely frustrated, and it shines through. The emotion was best on this one.

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I would hurl words into this darkness and wait for an echo, and if an echo sounded, no matter how faintly, I would send other words to tell, to march, to fight, to create a sense of hunger for life that gnaws in us all. ~Richard Wright
thank u for commenting on my work. i appreciate all of ur help very much :)

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If you've got nothing to die for,
Then what have you got to live for?

Dreams are unreal by definition,
Reality is changing one's dreams,
Because when one dream is realised, a new one is born
I know the feeling. =) I love the way you described it.

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THE FUZZY SOCK. [link] 2 Webnovels.
~Life is the art of drawing without an eraser~
Thanx :)

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If you've got nothing to die for,
Then what have you got to live for?

Dreams are unreal by definition,
Reality is changing one's dreams,
Because when one dream is realised, a new one is born

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