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A Thought-Provoking Thought by ~ginger-elvis:iconginger-elvis:



This is a dangerous poem
If you read this poem you will die
If you ignore it you will live
But can you tear your eyes away?
Do you want to ignore it?
Would you pass up the wisdom it can bestow on you?
Or would you rather reminisce to yourself?
About the life you thought you'd lived
Or the lie you thought had been forgived
About the goal that you worked to achieve
Or the gift you happened to recieve
About the heart you thought you'd satisfied
Or the dream you always thought had died
If you were to die at the end of this poem
Could you really say you'd lived at all?
©2008-2009 ~ginger-elvis
:iconginger-elvis:

Author's Comments

My first piece of poetry
I really do hope everyone likes it and I also hope nobody thinks I'm some sort of "poser" who can't string a stanza together.

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:iconmy-heart-explodes:
Wow.

Just...Wow.

I like it.

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Electric Fences and Guns.
:iconginger-elvis:
thnx so much :ahoy:

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If you've got nothing to die for,
Then what have you got to live for?

Dreams are unreal by definition,
Reality is changing one's dreams,
Because when one dream is realised, a new one is born
:iconmy-heart-explodes:
No problem :)

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Electric Fences and Guns.
:iconvaly31:
WoW......It's so f*cking GREAT!:heart: ....It made my day....and to think I don't really like poems!:D
:iconginger-elvis:
wow thnx that means alot:love:

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If you've got nothing to die for,
Then what have you got to live for?

Dreams are unreal by definition,
Reality is changing one's dreams,
Because when one dream is realised, a new one is born
:iconcilen-chii:
=o =o =o POetry, cool. I like thish poem, has some truth to it, in a metaforical(can't spell D8) sense.

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=D
I believe in God and Jesus is my savior, I'm not afraid to say it.

Remaining faith in Humanity points 08' 359/360
:iconginger-elvis:
thnx 4 the thoughtful commnt :)

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If you've got nothing to die for,
Then what have you got to live for?

Dreams are unreal by definition,
Reality is changing one's dreams,
Because when one dream is realised, a new one is born
:iconwizfrikiman:
Amazing! *faves*

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I put the "sane" back in "insane" - [link]

I support dA Scholarship [link]

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